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Writing 4



WRITING 4
20/5/2013
A paragraph
Topic sent
SS
Body
Concluding Sent

An Essay














 
                                                     Introductory Paragraph









 



                                                     Body Paragraph    




                                                      Concluding Paragraph



I. Introductory Paragraph


 
                                                    General statements (ít nhất là 2 câu)          



 
                                                   Thesis statement

Topic: There’s a big change in climate today which results from environment pollution. Discuss the effects of environment pollution on the world’s climate.

Thesis
statement
 
General statement
 
Environment is very important to our living life, suppling us with air, soil, water,… However, it is increasingly polluted mainly by human’s activities, which creates a variety of effects on us.

Keword (s): Environment pollution.
Leading sentences (câu dẫn dắt): However, it is increasingly polluted mainly by human’s activities, which creates a variety of effects on us.
* General statement: purposes?
- To introduce the topic: giới thiệu đề tài.
- To attact readers attention: để thu hút sự chú ý của người đọc.
- To lead readers to the focus of the essay: dẫn dắt người đọc những tiêu điểm của bài luận.
Indeed the environment pollution has caused three main effects on the world’s climate.
* Thesis statement: ý chính toàn bài văn (câu luận đề của bài luận, thuộc đoạn mở đề, câu cuối cùng của Introductory paragraph).
- 1 sentence.
- last sentence in the Introduction.
- express the main idea of the whole essay.
- may introduce the number of body paragraph.
- tell readers about the essay organization.
                       - Chronological order
organization
 
                       - Logical division of ideas
                       - Compavision & Contrast
                       - Cause … Effect
à Thesis statement quyết định Body sẽ có bao nhiêu ý để triển khai.
Practice I/104:
P1: 5 à 2 à 3 à 6 à 1 à 4.
P2: 2 à 3 à 1 à 6 à 4 à 5.
P3: 2 à 3 à 1 à 4.

21/5/2013
Topic sentence: Topic + Controlling idea.
Thesis statement: Topic + subtopics
                                    and   not only … but also  both … and
due to + N_phrase
qualities + N_phrase
because of + N_phrase
requires + A and B (N_phrase)
such as + N_phrase
: + N_phrase/Clause/V-ing
Practice 3/106:
1. A computer is necessary for college students for 3 reasons:
+ Write a research paper.
+ Search for the information for                     presentation
                                                                        discuss
                                                                        research paper
                                                                        improve one’s knowledge
+ Store the data.
+ Entertainment.
à A computer is necessary for college students for 3 reasons: It helps them to search for the information, it can store their data and it supplies a variety of entertainment.
à A computer is necessary for college students for 3 reasons: They can search information their study, store the data on their computer and entertainment.
2. International students have a difficult time taking notes in class due to
+ limited languages competence.
+ unfamiliar teaching and learning method.
+ psychology pressure.
à International students have a difficult time taking notes in class due to their limited languages competence, unfamiliar teaching and learning method and psychology pressure.
3. Successful students have the following qualities:
+ soft skill possession.
+ working hard (n-v) / hard working (adj) / deligence (n) / delgent (adj).
+ able to use a foreign language.
à Successful students have the following qualities: soft skill possession, working hard and ability use a foreign language.
4. A generation gap exists in my home because of
+ differents                  behaviours
                                    lifestyles                                         
                                    thoughts
                                    beliefs
                                    attitudes
à A generation gap exists in my home because of difference in lifestyles as well as thoughts.
5. To survive a major disaster such as an earthquake requires:
+ quick.
+ luck.
+ calmness.
+ intelligence.
+ good health.
à To survive a major disaster such as an earthquake requires: calmness, inteligence and good health.
6. Poverty creates negative consequences for society such as
+ crimes.
+ diseases.
+ war (political + economical conflicts).
+ social evils (increase in …).
à Poverty creates negative consequences for society such as an increase in social evils, diseases and war.
7. My two sisters are as different as day and night not only in ……. but also in ……
+ dressing styles.
+ characteristics.
+ attitudes.
+ beliefs.
+ behaviours.
+ appearanas.
à My two sisters are as different as day and night not only in appearance but also in characteristics.
8. Living in a city has certain advantages over living in the suburbs:
+ better education’s condition.
+ modern health services.
+ entertainments.
à Living in a city has certain advantages over living in the suburbs: Better education’s condition, more modern health services and more various forms of entertainments.

22/5/2013

23/5/2013
Concluding Paragraph









 
                                                     Introductory

                                                   Topic sent







 


                                                                                    Body  
                                                   Topic sent


Concluding
 
                                                A summary of the main points (1 or 2 sentences) about the topic
                                                     
                                                Writer’s comment / opinions
                                                + Modal verbs.
                                                + Think, believe, admit, suspect, agree, disagree,…

In short, In brief, In summary, To sum up, In conclusion,…
Practice 4 / 107
P1. In short, a person can control stress by setting suitable goals, do physical exercise, follow our interest and creating good relationship with family and friend. We must admit that stress is increasing in our life and causing of variety diseases. We will control easy stress if we do that many things.

 Topic

1. TEENGER – RELATED CRIMES
2. INTERNET
3. JOB TENDENCY








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