WRITING 4
20/5/2013
A paragraph
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Topic sent
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Body
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Concluding Sent
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An Essay
Introductory Paragraph
Body
Paragraph
Concluding Paragraph
I. Introductory Paragraph
General statements (ít nhất là 2 câu)
Thesis statement
Topic: There’s a big change in climate today which results from
environment pollution. Discuss the effects of environment pollution
on the world’s climate.
Environment is very important to our living life, suppling us with
air, soil, water,… However, it is increasingly polluted mainly by human’s
activities, which creates a variety of effects on us.
Keword
(s): Environment pollution.
Leading
sentences (câu dẫn dắt): However, it is increasingly polluted mainly by
human’s activities, which creates a variety of effects on us.
* General statement: purposes?
- To introduce the topic: giới thiệu đề
tài.
- To attact readers attention: để thu hút
sự chú ý của người đọc.
- To lead readers to the focus of the
essay: dẫn dắt người đọc những tiêu điểm của bài luận.
Indeed the
environment pollution has caused three main effects on the world’s climate.
* Thesis statement: ý chính toàn bài văn (câu luận
đề của bài luận, thuộc đoạn mở đề, câu cuối cùng của Introductory paragraph).
- 1 sentence.
- last sentence in the Introduction.
- express the main idea of the whole
essay.
- may introduce the number of body
paragraph.
- tell readers about the essay
organization.
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Chronological order
- Logical division of ideas
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Compavision & Contrast
- Cause
… Effect
à Thesis statement quyết
định Body sẽ có bao nhiêu ý để triển khai.
Practice I/104:
P1: 5 à
2 à
3 à
6 à
1 à
4.
P2: 2 à
3 à
1 à
6 à
4 à
5.
P3: 2 à
3 à
1 à
4.
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Topic sentence: Topic + Controlling idea.
and not only … but also both … and
due to + N_phrase
qualities + N_phrase
because of + N_phrase
requires + A and B (N_phrase)
such as + N_phrase
: +
N_phrase/Clause/V-ing
Practice 3/106:
1. A computer is necessary for college students for 3
reasons:
+ Write a research paper.
discuss
research
paper
improve
one’s knowledge
+ Store the data.
+ Entertainment.
à A computer is necessary for college students for 3 reasons:
It helps them to search for the information, it can store their data and it
supplies a variety of entertainment.
à A computer is necessary for college students for 3 reasons:
They can search information their study, store the data on their computer and
entertainment.
2. International students have a difficult time taking
notes in class due to
+ limited languages competence.
+ unfamiliar teaching and learning method.
+ psychology pressure.
à International students have a difficult time taking notes
in class due to their limited languages competence, unfamiliar teaching and
learning method and psychology pressure.
3. Successful students have the following qualities:
+ soft skill possession.
+ working hard (n-v) / hard working (adj)
/ deligence (n) / delgent (adj).
+ able to use a foreign language.
à Successful students have the following qualities: soft
skill possession, working hard and ability use a foreign language.
4. A generation gap exists in my home because of
lifestyles
thoughts
beliefs
attitudes
à A generation gap exists in my home because of difference in
lifestyles as well as thoughts.
5. To survive a major disaster such as an earthquake
requires:
+ quick.
+ luck.
+ calmness.
+ intelligence.
+ good health.
à To survive a major disaster such as an earthquake requires:
calmness, inteligence and good health.
6. Poverty creates negative consequences for society such
as
+ crimes.
+ diseases.
+ war (political + economical conflicts).
+ social evils (increase in …).
à Poverty creates negative consequences for society such as
an increase in social evils, diseases and war.
7. My two sisters are as different as day and night not
only in ……. but also in ……
+ dressing styles.
+ characteristics.
+ attitudes.
+ beliefs.
+ behaviours.
+ appearanas.
à My two sisters are as different as day and night not only
in appearance but also in characteristics.
8. Living in a city has certain advantages over living in
the suburbs:
+ better education’s condition.
+ modern health services.
+ entertainments.
à Living in a city has certain advantages over living in the
suburbs: Better education’s condition, more modern health services and more
various forms of entertainments.
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Concluding Paragraph
Introductory
Body
Topic sent
A
summary of the main points (1 or 2 sentences) about the topic
Writer’s
comment / opinions
+
Modal verbs.
+
Think, believe, admit, suspect, agree, disagree,…
In short, In brief, In summary, To sum up,
In conclusion,…
Practice 4 / 107
P1. In short, a
person can control stress by setting suitable goals, do physical exercise, follow
our interest and creating good relationship with family and friend. We must
admit that stress is increasing in our life and causing of variety diseases. We
will control easy stress if we do that many things.
Topic
1. TEENGER – RELATED CRIMES
2. INTERNET
3. JOB TENDENCY
